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Post by eleyna on Jan 31, 2012 1:10:20 GMT
So basically since I think about rping 24-7, I wrote paragraphs. THe assignment was to make a creative one paragraph story with some words she gave us. So during these, you'll find weird words (which will be the ones that I was required to). I promised I'd share them as long as I got a good grade and I did. With comments. Mind you- these are super breif since she HATTTEESS it when I write long paragraphs.
Mareyna: Comment Kind of drops and it kinda does cause I realized I got to the bottom of the page so I had to END IT.
The letter seemed to deride Marcus as he sat, sataring at the words. His heart felt as if it was slowly abating away. Normally, Marcus was a very audacious, strong, and easy going man. Now if anyone dared to walk past him, he or she would see a weak, sad man who berefted in life. Empty and alone, he re-read the manuscript to himself once more. Eleyna apprised clearly in the letter that she had left him. Marcus pictured her telling him how she didn't want to place him in anymore danger. The girl was on the run, and spending time with Eleyna was indeed dangerous. However, he had consigned with himself that it didn't matter. Any fate was worse than not being with her. His brown eyes gazed downward, letting go of the letter. Before Marcus had been cogitating on heading to the bar, but his heartache told him to head home. The bar had been more of Eleyna's capricious idea anyways. Turdging all the way back to his place as if he had been defated, Marcus found the door to his place had already been opened. For a moment, he just stared as if his acumen would corroborat that the door was indeed open. There on his bed was a beautiful woman. She had lifted her head at the sound of his entrance. Marcus had shock written all over his face. It was Eleyna. She ran into his arms, blubbering happily about how she coulnd't bare to live without him. Marcus responded in holding her closely and how he, himself, would run after the evil creature running after Eleyna.
Deride - mock
Abating - diminish
Audacious - bold
Bereft - lacking
Apprised - inform
Consign -entrust
Cogitating - consider
Capricious - spontaneous
Acumen - insight
Corroborate - confirm |
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Post by cierra on Jan 31, 2012 1:23:27 GMT
Casra: comment: interesting story line 89 89 is my nickname. Long story. I'm her favorite XD
The shapeshifter took a deep breath into her lungs. Cierra's big brown eyes widened at what information she had gleaned in with just a wiff. Her dog senses detected forest, grass, her brother in pitbull form, and... Cason. Cason, the man that still managed to incise on her heart, was in the forest with her blood thirsty brother. Cierra knew exactly what her brother intended to do to the hunter. He had imparted he would find Cason and kill him. With her fears pounding in her mind, she transformed into a red husky. What once was a gentle, equanimity woman was now an extremely furious dog. Cierra sprinted toward Cason and her brother on all fours. There was her brother's pitbull form, crouched and ready to pounce on the unexpecting Cas. As quickly as she could think, Cierra went through doctrinaire ideas, none of which were innocuous fpr her. She thought about just making an extemporaneous speech to her brother about how she held much encomium toward him and this wasn't felicitous. Yet, she knew the speech was useless. Instead, she saw him leap. Her time had ran out. Her powerful legs leaped too and collided with her brother's. Surprise was her advantage but only for a moment. The dogs wrestled harshly together, biting and niping. NOthing was going to inveigle anyone to stop this fight. A shot was heard and her brother sprinted from the injury on his leg. Cierra panted, looked over at Cas, and collasped on the spot. Her strength left her. Cierra had done it. She saved Cason, the man she loved.
Glean - gather
Incise - penetrate
Impart - disclose
Equanimity - poise
Doctrinaire - theoretical
Innocuous - safe
Extemporaneous - improvised
Encomium - admiration
Felicitous - appropriate
Inveigle - lure
I wrote one for Kimble but it needs to be graded first <3 |
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Post by FADED on Jan 31, 2012 1:50:22 GMT
FJKFJAIOFJDSAOFJAOSID BOTH OF THESE ARE SO FLIPPING ADORABLE!!! SERIOUSLY MADE ME JUST GIGGLE MY LITTLE HEAD OF AND SQUEE LIKE A CRAZY WOMAN. <333333   |
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Post by eleyna on Feb 1, 2012 2:16:28 GMT
Awwwwww, THANK YOU FADED <333333333 I LOVE YOU BUNCHES!
And this isn't my story but it's relative and I wanted to share my little thoughts of happiness with everyone. Anyways- so we all have to write these stories, yes? Teacher says 'does anyone want to share their story?' and this guy Tanner gets up there. Tanner tells a story about a hardworking guy named Michael and a fun crazy person named Miley. How Michael wanted to show Miley how great of a person he was- old fashioned and respectable. (Now from this point on, he is ACTUALLY DOING THESE MOTIONS) And how Michael wrote this story to tell her and read it in front of the class, walked over to her (which happened to be me O.o Me=Miley) and got down on one knee and asked 'will you go to prom with me' IN FRONT OF THE ENTIRE CLASS! Yeah, how could I possibly say no to that? So Emily has a prom date XD Anyways, fluff for peoples x3
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Post by ALLY on Feb 1, 2012 21:49:54 GMT
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Post by kimmi on Feb 7, 2012 5:07:49 GMT
Hehehehe, Ally you make me smile i luv you <333333
Kimble: she didn't really have a comment cause she was not in the happy mood grading these cause she was sick. Bet she thought it was epic
Cameras surrounded Kimberly as soon as she walked out of the building. Sometimes her non-sinecure as a celebrity model was too much for her. The precept it had on her life was disappointing. She constantly had to tout herself to the public, blinded by the camera flashes. Even in the recalictrant crowd, Kimberly spotted the sad pair of brown eyes. Most of the time, Kimberly would have remained lolled, acting as if he were sent to ostracize. Pretending Kale wasn't her boyfriend was the hardest thing in the world (espeically now that the relationship was past the nascent stage). This time, she felt she coulnd't ignore that rejected looking face anymore. It made her heart feel as if it were sering away, reprining that it may be his last straw. He had to keep placate about her rude manner, constant perepatetic job, and ignore in front of the press. Kimberly couldn't keep him a secret anymore. She wanted him to know that he was the most important thing in her life! Acting on vagary, she burst into a run, her heels clicking loudly against the pavement. She shouted his name, making his eyes brighten. Suddenly,t he burnette girl was in front of him, tackling him in a hug. Blubbering over the chatter and gasps around her, she made what was probably the most prolix sentence that had ever came out of her mouth. Yet, Kale looked as if he understood every word about her confession of giving up her repuation. The expression on his face couldn't have made Kimberly happier.
Sinecure - easy occupation
Precept - rule
Tout - promote
Recalcitrant - unmanagable
Loll - relax
Ostracize - exile
Nascent - budding, blooming
Sere - withered
Reprine - fret
Perepatetic - mobile
Vagary - promote
Prolix - wordy
Next is Rosamon because of the words I was given <3 |
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Post by damon on Feb 14, 2012 2:35:53 GMT
Rosamon: Comment Random smiley faces and nice at the end I'll underline what she put a smiley face on. For random reasons.
When Damon Ellis walked into Rosabella's dancing class, she thought she was going to go up and punch him. It had only been a week since he had betrayed her trust. She knew she should have adumbrated it happening, but it still ended up being hard. Anyone could have descried that Damon used only blandishment words, which caused him to belie women to think he would be there forever. Rosabella knew this, but thought he would contravene his normal self with her. It could be said she was culpable for thinking he would make abberation choices. No. After he asked her permission to cheat, she broke it. Now here he was with his stupid golden locks trying to impress her. Rosabella knew the money he spent to be there; she was going to have to live with it. Because Damon proved to be a horrible dancer, the class commiserated at him for Rosabella was captious with every move he made. For once, Damon didn't feel as if everyone ardented him by th eend of the lesson. She snapped at him to exit with the rest of the class. The fool stayed. Her raven black hair swished as her head turned towards him, crossing her arms and threatning him again. Damon looked as if he wasn't sure what he wanted to do. So the firetamer rambled about how he had came just to see her and to talk to her again. Rosabella felt her insides clench, but didn't move. Finally Damon sighed and asked for one more chance. The girl knew she was going to regret her yes, but she knew she still loved those big blue eyes.
Adumbrate - foreshadow, to fortell
Descry - information gained from observation
Blandishment - words used for flattery
Contravene - act contrary to
Culpable - worthy of blame
Abberation - act of deviating from the normal
Commiserate - pity
Captious - to find fault
Ardent - admiration
Next is Chade. I don't know if it was as fluffy but sure flipping cute <3333 |
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